tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post3769523779163536586..comments2024-03-12T20:13:06.566-10:00Comments on dust bunny club of north america: I AM BECAUSE YOU ARE. (edited)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-69200608481209109382006-04-21T05:25:00.000-10:002006-04-21T05:25:00.000-10:00Aww how sweet. I never know what I'm gonna find in...Aww how sweet. I never know what I'm gonna find in this wild, dusty jounral of your's. Good entry....Have a Beer-Good Weekend!!!<br><br>BrendaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-35347871631818224382006-04-21T05:34:00.000-10:002006-04-21T05:34:00.000-10:00not all poetry has to rhyme.. so there.isn't it st...not all poetry has to rhyme.. so there.<br><br>isn't it strange when something we least expect comes out of us?!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-38214585652062871982006-04-21T05:42:00.000-10:002006-04-21T05:42:00.000-10:00I don't know if I've ever written a poem that rhym...I don't know if I've ever written a poem that rhymes. Well, you know, maybe a limerick or two.<br>-Paul<br>http://journals.aol.ca/plittle/AuroraWalkingVacation/<br>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-22576585120022012642006-04-21T06:03:00.000-10:002006-04-21T06:03:00.000-10:00Wow, That was great. Really enjoyed it.ChristinaWow, That was great. Really enjoyed it.<br>Christina<br>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-19230458637959753912006-04-21T06:55:00.000-10:002006-04-21T06:55:00.000-10:00Dorn...that was good. If you were to position yo...Dorn...that was good. If you were to position your sentences as follows, you'll see that it does flow, it does rhyme and the rhythm is excellent when you speak this out loud.<br><br>If I am a flower then you are a petal,<br>Iam merely a stem without you.<br><br>If I am a tree then yu are a leaf, I<br>am bare and vulnerable without you.<br><br>If I am a bird then you are a feather,<br>I cannot soar without you.<br><br>I I am a star then you are a twinkle,<br>I cannot shine without you.<br><br>If I am a river then you ar a raindrop,<br>I could not grow without you.<br><br>I am, and you are there for me,<br>I could not be without you.<br><br><br>I'm learning on a poerty site that sometimes some words are not necessary and in this case the "but" threw the rhythm off.....hope you don't mind me taking liverty with this.....love the poem though....Sandi<br><br><br><br><br><br><br>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-14099117133887582982006-04-21T07:41:00.000-10:002006-04-21T07:41:00.000-10:00I love it! ANd I read Sandi all the time... but ...I love it! ANd I read Sandi all the time... but you are a talented poet too! <br><br>be well,<br>Dawn<br>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-16344865557818150572006-04-21T10:14:00.000-10:002006-04-21T10:14:00.000-10:00Lovely and sappy and beautiful!Lovely and sappy and beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-34607771694019292562006-04-21T13:32:00.000-10:002006-04-21T13:32:00.000-10:00Just found your journal today and I really enjoyed...Just found your journal today and I really enjoyed reading it. <br>Love your down-to-earth style and sense of humor!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-59061400926828632632006-04-21T17:02:00.000-10:002006-04-21T17:02:00.000-10:00Well Dorn,I guess then that I am because you were....Well Dorn,<br>I guess then that I am because you were. Love you way of thinking. <br><br>Your DadAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-23371836566126404602006-04-22T04:08:00.000-10:002006-04-22T04:08:00.000-10:00That's so nice. I'll have to check out sandi's jou...That's so nice. I'll have to check out sandi's journal. Have a great weekend.<br>http://journals.aol.com/am4039/life/<br>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-88074325855021132652006-04-22T05:33:00.000-10:002006-04-22T05:33:00.000-10:00Lovely poem. I like it!Lovely poem. I like it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-31412845269142997362006-04-22T06:13:00.000-10:002006-04-22T06:13:00.000-10:00What a lovely poem ~ thanks for sharing it ~ AllyWhat a lovely poem ~ thanks for sharing it ~ AllyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-81309910205528892762006-04-23T04:40:00.000-10:002006-04-23T04:40:00.000-10:00This is a lovely poem. It reminds me of a childre...This is a lovely poem. It reminds me of a children's book that I used to read to my boys. The little bunny plans to run away and become something else, but his mother always changes to something so that she can be with him. Very Nice!<br><br>Tina<br>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7246096290025572654.post-83555360716921231742006-04-23T09:02:00.000-10:002006-04-23T09:02:00.000-10:00This is a beautiful poem, Dorn! And I love the pho...This is a beautiful poem, Dorn! And I love the photo!<br>:) HeatherAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com